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posted by contagion_publishing on September 10, 2008 at 8:22 AM | link to this | reply

A scary and well written memory. For a child or adult, that trapped feeling . . . horrible.

posted by yellowrose55 on September 9, 2008 at 4:06 PM | link to this | reply

Powerful ...thanks

posted by Shams-i-Heartsong on September 8, 2008 at 4:56 PM | link to this | reply

It felt so tragic until you cleared it up! What an experience and reoccurring at that!  sam

posted by sam444 on September 8, 2008 at 3:59 PM | link to this | reply

Scary dream. Funny what emerges into sleep! 

posted by merkie on September 8, 2008 at 12:33 PM | link to this | reply

This is a very good dream poem

posted by Kayzzaman on September 8, 2008 at 12:23 PM | link to this | reply

My first memory was walking down a staircase to our new house when I was 3. I could hardly reach for the banister.

I returned to that same place with my children a few years ago, to show them were I grew up. The staircase was so tiny :)

posted by Lotus_Flower on September 8, 2008 at 11:58 AM | link to this | reply

Lilly

I used to have a re-occurring dream of wallking down this long pier and I would fall off the end.  I have nothing to attach that to (no childhood memory) and one day it simply went away.  They're haunting though, aren't they. 

posted by Troosha on September 8, 2008 at 10:48 AM | link to this | reply