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This poem brings a smile to your face, you can't help but smile. Thank you for that.

posted by Brickhouse on September 19, 2008 at 1:05 AM | link to this | reply

BEAUTIFUL, THANKS FOR TAKING US ALONG. KENT

posted by Riversidepoet on September 17, 2008 at 10:27 AM | link to this | reply

Maybe it always should be ...

... October in the rain with love under an umbrella - - - - genio

 

posted by ggXpress on September 8, 2008 at 5:23 PM | link to this | reply

Isn't love grand smiling in good fortune.

posted by merkie on September 8, 2008 at 11:26 AM | link to this | reply

Love is a wondrous thing! Grand poem! sam

posted by sam444 on September 8, 2008 at 7:58 AM | link to this | reply

Wonderful poem!

 My daughter was born in october.  Great work.

posted by Kolekshuns on September 8, 2008 at 7:55 AM | link to this | reply

Nice love poem ...

posted by afzal50 on September 8, 2008 at 5:38 AM | link to this | reply

so beautiful!

What a wonderful love

posted by pelagus on September 8, 2008 at 12:16 AM | link to this | reply

posted by mejustme on September 7, 2008 at 10:33 PM | link to this | reply

very sweet

posted by lustorlove on September 7, 2008 at 2:41 PM | link to this | reply

Love and its indicators! Well written piece!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on September 7, 2008 at 2:29 PM | link to this | reply

There is nothing like love...is there... They say Spring is the season of love...but I beg to disagree... Fall is  the one...with its golden leaves and cool winds.  Great poem my friend, it captured the feeling of being in love.

posted by Sinome on September 7, 2008 at 10:34 AM | link to this | reply

Lotus_Flower, you've given us some of the ingredients of true love and

romance...brought a smile to my face...reminded me of that song "Sining in the Rain".....

posted by Rumor on September 7, 2008 at 8:00 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent!

posted by Kayzzaman on September 7, 2008 at 4:48 AM | link to this | reply

Benzinha

Thank you for the corrections :) Glad you like it

posted by Lotus_Flower on September 7, 2008 at 1:10 AM | link to this | reply

I really enjoy upbeat messages and this one is very upbeat.

Grammar changes are,  in the first paragraph, "I sing and AM"

Later you say, 'You great " and you mean "you greet"

and finally it would either be "kiss increases" or "kisses increase"

otherwise, perfection again in your message and emotion communicated to the listener, reader.

As you know, I always imagine these as songs....

posted by benzinha on September 7, 2008 at 12:45 AM | link to this | reply