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There is great flow and harmony in this poem .

posted by afzal50 on August 30, 2008 at 6:33 AM | link to this | reply

Never JUST "whispers in the wind" or "shadows in the night", they were real, and important and lasting part of life that helped to mold and make you what you are. 

posted by TAPS. on August 30, 2008 at 5:59 AM | link to this | reply

how could you write something so sad...so beautiful... If I could only reach out and touch your heart... Bless you dear one...and all that may have been causing the hurt...

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on August 30, 2008 at 12:30 AM | link to this | reply

Heart aches of love, so sad and reaching out are these lines of love. Wow.

posted by yellowrose55 on August 29, 2008 at 10:13 PM | link to this | reply

Oh, my heart aches! I thought this line to be so representative of lost within the realm we exist: Have I gone so far that I've forgotten who I am?,

Are you doing okay!? I remain vigilant! Love to you sam

posted by sam444 on August 29, 2008 at 9:35 PM | link to this | reply

So sad and beautiful

posted by Lotus_Flower on August 29, 2008 at 5:48 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome, very poignant and touching...

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posted by Rumored on August 29, 2008 at 5:33 PM | link to this | reply

So very sad and touching

posted by Sunnybeach7 on August 29, 2008 at 4:02 PM | link to this | reply

Aww Sinome..I'm speechless! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on August 29, 2008 at 2:10 PM | link to this | reply

We never know tomorrow ...

... not even the next second and ... it's so important to take care of here and now, let go when gone and take responsibility for what happens in our own life whether it's a beginning or a departure ... afterwards we may see the wisdom in the reason ...

Excellent written ! -  - genio

posted by ggXpress on August 29, 2008 at 1:44 PM | link to this | reply

Wow!Probably a difficult subject for both writer and reader, but kind of blew my socks off.

posted by jfm32 on August 29, 2008 at 11:28 AM | link to this | reply

So very beautiful .Heartwrenching emotions. Hugs for you.

posted by merkie on August 29, 2008 at 9:27 AM | link to this | reply

oh my sinome!

posted by 9STAR on August 29, 2008 at 7:16 AM | link to this | reply