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Off the meter! Whoa you really gave all my emotions juice! Great writing.

posted by Mystereo on December 16, 2008 at 6:47 PM | link to this | reply

Realization was the message for me. Affirmation was so well depicted in this line: I shall remain tall among the oaks and grow  Bravo!  sam

posted by sam444 on August 28, 2008 at 2:15 PM | link to this | reply

such a beautiful romantic piece....somber...heartfelt...sensitive...great work my dear!

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on August 28, 2008 at 12:27 AM | link to this | reply