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This is a light for the world to see planting seeds for change in humans.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 21, 2008 at 6:44 AM
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this is deep....
posted by
mejustme
on August 28, 2008 at 6:31 PM
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I think this poem speaks volumes. I especially liked being responsible for our actions and being responsible to call ourselves to action! I thought the cadence to be quite good too! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 28, 2008 at 1:48 PM
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YBSP
Wow, this is pretty intense but as Sinome said it probably reflects the thinking of most of us (at least some of the time); falling short of our goals, repeating the same mistakes, and never truly rising up to make the changes we need to make.
posted by
Troosha
on August 28, 2008 at 8:18 AM
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I applaud your sincerity my dear...this beautiful piece written from the crux of your heart is an inspiring work. We all are in this boat every once in a while in our lives. Well done!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on August 27, 2008 at 9:31 PM
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I applaud your sincerity my dear...this beautiful piece written from the crux of your heart is an inspiring work. We all are in this boat every once in a while in our lives. Well done!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on August 27, 2008 at 9:30 PM
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I like it Henry... it is honest and straiight forward... it could be speaking about any of us... wasting time thinking about what we are going to do without realizing life is what happens while we are planning it. Great poem, its musical...reads like a song...
posted by
Sinome
on August 27, 2008 at 9:13 PM
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