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Drink yourself! How is that for a cup of realization! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 26, 2008 at 1:53 PM
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You certainly covered it all. . .enthralling and dark - excellent-loved it!
posted by
ChristianHorrorWriter
on August 26, 2008 at 11:55 AM
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"loyalty's drool" - yes, thats hypocrisy...a tough but right-on read...
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posted by
Rumor
on August 26, 2008 at 6:38 AM
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hypocrisy...
been thru enough of this my dear one.... im just tired of it, hope we dont have to come across any flag bearer of this dear....
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on August 26, 2008 at 5:01 AM
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wow - I love the flow
swift, harsh and condemning - Love it
posted by
lionreign
on August 26, 2008 at 3:14 AM
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You're most welcome Luz, and glad that you liked .................
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on August 25, 2008 at 10:36 PM
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Re: Very well written
Thanks, Kayzzaman!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 25, 2008 at 10:34 PM
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Bhaskar
Thanks! a compliment to have my name infront of '-like'!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 25, 2008 at 10:34 PM
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Very well written
posted by
Kayzzaman
on August 25, 2008 at 10:20 PM
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The air that is you
Sip in the substance
Drink yourself.
So, so, so very luz-like
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on August 25, 2008 at 10:17 PM
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