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   I can feel the emotions throughout this poem love.  ...

posted by BC-A on August 26, 2008 at 2:17 PM | link to this | reply

The essence of loss so poignantly versed! It is eerie because we all go through it! Exquisite imagery too my darlin' Sinome. sam loves you! 

posted by sam444 on August 26, 2008 at 1:41 PM | link to this | reply

alone!!
when is that a bad thing.. beside it is just a state of mind

posted by YBSP1 on August 26, 2008 at 11:32 AM | link to this | reply

posted by afzal50 on August 26, 2008 at 11:17 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome...
I agree with Troosha's comment..alone is by no means lonely when one understands and learns to love oneself & God..then one constantly & unconditionally emanates love and is not dependent or needy of another's love, but is capable of giving self-less love..if only people understood that, there will not be so many heartbreaks..write on, queen of love poetry :)! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on August 26, 2008 at 9:30 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome
Given I endorse the concept that there is a huge difference from being alone and feeling lonliness…. maybe she won’t be alone at all (she’ll have herself).  Poignant thoughts….

posted by Troosha on August 26, 2008 at 7:31 AM | link to this | reply

so urgent and vital
I can almost feel panic by association

posted by lionreign on August 26, 2008 at 7:06 AM | link to this | reply

Oh my dear... this is far too wrenching... I know what you mean....Hang in there my love, alone you'll never be dear one. Never. A person with your gentle heart is loved everywhere. and for that you shall never be for one second alone. Everyone is here for dear, and so am I. I'll always be.

May the angel of light stay in your heart my love.

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on August 26, 2008 at 5:11 AM | link to this | reply

Whether we call it fate or karma or ...
... whatever ... our path of learning may be more than hard - - you made a good expression ! -  - genio

posted by ggXpress on August 26, 2008 at 4:54 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent presentation my friend
and a fine piece indeed; very well done; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on August 26, 2008 at 4:28 AM | link to this | reply

Poignancy of the thought of being left all alone once again, my princess? Wish you the very best I can desert prince.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on August 25, 2008 at 9:54 PM | link to this | reply

yes, so...she can't do that.....she just don't want to love any one to
loose....

posted by Star5_ on August 25, 2008 at 9:14 PM | link to this | reply

so emotional

posted by Samantha39 on August 25, 2008 at 8:51 PM | link to this | reply

ah yes.
Red roses from me and you know who!
=^..^=

posted by Whacky on August 25, 2008 at 8:22 PM | link to this | reply

how sad

posted by Lanetay on August 25, 2008 at 8:12 PM | link to this | reply

Poignant, my friend....

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on August 25, 2008 at 5:13 PM | link to this | reply