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Jen that was marvolous...so well expreswsed... very inspiring :-)


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Sinome
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August 23, 2008
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beautiful encouragement. We, the writers do make a difference ! Well said . Encore!
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merkie
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August 23, 2008
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Make it hard to buy into apathy
no patience for complacency...
posted by
mysteria
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August 23, 2008
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love ya mermaid
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muley12
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August 23, 2008
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Very well stated ..
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afzal50
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August 23, 2008
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I love the beautiful descriptions that you use in yur work. It is so vivid.

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GALACTUS_
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August 23, 2008
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every flip of their wings
bleach the indifferences in the wind

posted by
Lotus_Flower
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August 23, 2008
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Purple, my dear
This line struck me so deep and profound, that I am overjoyed"The verbatim digestion
of propagated words and wisdom
by this pilgrims of the sun
is strengthening the limbs of;
the dying hopes
faltering faith
dreaded ignorance
distorting dementia
destructed souls
tortured hearts
and more…
There is a pilgrimage"… Wonderful work, so wonderful, and so strong. 


posted by
Bhaskar.ing
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August 22, 2008
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you might be right
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lustorlove
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August 22, 2008
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posted by
9STAR
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August 22, 2008
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