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I have to admit

I did not entirely understand this poem but I enjoyed its rhythm and flow

posted by mejustme on August 21, 2008 at 4:52 PM | link to this | reply

I think my brain is bleeding

From the magnificence of this piece, it keeps running through my head - great work!

posted by lionreign on August 21, 2008 at 6:49 AM | link to this | reply

Sam is right...this needs to be read and re-read to get the greatness of it.  A work of art, pictures and all.  Good work!

posted by Sinome on August 20, 2008 at 8:22 PM | link to this | reply

haunting...such reverberating piece...very well crafted my dear.

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on August 20, 2008 at 7:31 PM | link to this | reply

What a great trail to follow on this epiphany! I loved this: Throughout this epiphany. It was a great set up for the imagery that followed. There are so many wonderful lines! I read it twice! The second time was astonishing!  sam

posted by sam444 on August 20, 2008 at 6:37 PM | link to this | reply

Re: The combination of words and pictures is very impactful!!!

thanks, Resurrection. Photobucket is a wonderful thing

posted by Luz_Briar on August 20, 2008 at 6:08 PM | link to this | reply

The combination of words and pictures is very impactful!!!

posted by resurrectionman on August 20, 2008 at 5:16 PM | link to this | reply

Plucking

probably my personal favorite in the Frigidity poems. Though opened to interpretation, it was not written about sexual intercourse, though I realize how much it must sound so. Hope you enjoyed!

posted by Luz_Briar on August 20, 2008 at 4:36 PM | link to this | reply