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everyone!
thank you all for reading! there's an unlikely story behind what inspired this one, but i won't go into that
posted by
Luz_Briar
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August 20, 2008
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phew
That is some very rich imagery - I think I will have to reread a few times before I capture it all. thanks
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lionreign
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August 20, 2008
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posted by
Bel_
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August 19, 2008
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I loved how the imagery built and then included the reader. the use of color so enhanced the imagery as well! And I was so taken with this line: Where night’s a violet coo! Exquisite use!
BTW, you can add 'licious' to any word at my blog to describe my poetry! I loved it! sam
posted by
sam444
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August 19, 2008
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Man that is deep...no pun intended!
posted by
_teddypoet_
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August 19, 2008
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Sacrifice
intended to be read aloud, to music. however, my musician never got around to writing that music so, for now this is just an example of a very abstract mood poem.
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Luz_Briar
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August 19, 2008
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