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I thought this was outstanding! So fresh and real! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 19, 2008 at 7:36 PM
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right on the line With TLC, BCA, "top of the stairs"
posted by
BC-A
on August 19, 2008 at 4:17 PM
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I liked this poem very much, it is honest and flows well, almost like lyrics of a popular song. Good job!
posted by
Sinome
on August 19, 2008 at 12:20 PM
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Excellent stuff, well done
posted by
Kayzzaman
on August 19, 2008 at 10:24 AM
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