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it's just about how people favor concrete thought over abstract. i wouldnt get it either if i didnt write it
posted by
Luz_Briar
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August 18, 2008
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wow so much imagery and emotions are in here my dear....



posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
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August 18, 2008
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Poignant and laden with great imagery! I especially liked:
Keep it for yourself, Concrete. Excellent! sam
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sam444
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August 18, 2008
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5:34 PM
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i don' get it but this the 3rd one in a row i didn't get.
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Sudanym_
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August 18, 2008
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Excellent, very well written
posted by
Kayzzaman
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August 18, 2008
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