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pel--

this is full of strong emotions--and you captured it into your style of poetry wonderfully-which i know is hard! 

thanks for always reading me-i love what you capture in my writing-:):)

posted by bumpsinaroad on August 18, 2008 at 5:15 PM | link to this | reply

Great contemplation and outstanding imagery!  sam

posted by sam444 on August 18, 2008 at 5:04 PM | link to this | reply

Very nice, well done

posted by Kayzzaman on August 17, 2008 at 10:10 PM | link to this | reply