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Hi Luz, I just am in love with your poetry
Fantastic, powerful and written with deep feelings that touches the heart of its readers so intimately. Kudos!
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on August 15, 2008 at 6:16 AM
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Powerful and sharp
Your satire is razor edged - Good job and great imagery
posted by
lionreign
on August 15, 2008 at 3:27 AM
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Luz
I feel as if you are exorcizing demons in this. Keep doing what you need to do to get it all out.
posted by
Bel_
on August 13, 2008 at 10:29 PM
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NiteTide
sorry about that.
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 13, 2008 at 9:51 PM
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okay, wow, the ending just sent chills down my spine......
posted by
NiteTide
on August 13, 2008 at 8:21 PM
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Everyone!
thanks so much for reading! i'll be catching up on reading all of you soon!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 13, 2008 at 6:29 PM
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I love where my mind went during the course of reading this very poignant poem! I love the cutting edge feeling I get! Bravo! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 13, 2008 at 12:51 PM
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Yes, it is a bit sarcastic
posted by
Kayzzaman
on August 13, 2008 at 11:46 AM
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ouch! Biting sarcasm all the way through..each poem gets moreso...
not for the faint of heart, but thats ok, too..
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posted by
Rumor
on August 13, 2008 at 10:26 AM
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Charming
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on August 13, 2008 at 9:32 AM
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