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One thing that comes through in your poem for all the confusion you
genuinely articulate, is that the outside and the inside are connected
posted by
Straightforward
on August 14, 2008 at 1:46 AM
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my friend thank you very tranquilizing
posted by
Smittenheimer
on August 13, 2008 at 2:21 PM
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This is a fantastic line: My eyes focus through the closed glass! Wow oh wow! am
posted by
sam444
on August 13, 2008 at 11:24 AM
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you are way too young to discover the fullness of life young poet...the rougher things get in life...the smarter you become over the years my dear...as long as you dont give up on it...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on August 13, 2008 at 1:20 AM
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There is feeling of homelessness in everyone's mind...
posted by
Kayzzaman
on August 13, 2008 at 1:05 AM
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