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Thanks to you all for reading.
The whole idea of this poem was to confuse the reader. Just when you get worked up and mad/upset later you realise it is nothing really serious. Thanks so much for reading. Sophie.
posted by
safriyie
on August 14, 2008 at 12:37 PM
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I loved it! Thanks for the notation! It is wild what will take a man away! I think it was wonderful how the poem just stated he would be home in the end! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 13, 2008 at 7:11 AM
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You got me there
Didn't realize it was the TV untill the very last line - great work :)))
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on August 12, 2008 at 10:42 AM
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safriyie
On the surface a simple theme but you turned it into a lovely piece....
posted by
Troosha
on August 12, 2008 at 8:36 AM
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TV Screen Rival
very creative. had me thinking it was a girl for a little while!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 12, 2008 at 7:13 AM
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This is great!
It really had me wondering for a moment.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on August 11, 2008 at 3:48 PM
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posted by
lestate7
on August 11, 2008 at 2:48 PM
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