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Great pleading indeed !
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afzal50
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August 11, 2008
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It has been known for freedom to be misused in this way
our right it seems even if we have to plough through others' feelings; great piece; thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
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August 11, 2008
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Great job... this could be a good song
posted by
coolacen
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August 11, 2008
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tough guy....you have the grip in song writing my dear...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
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August 10, 2008
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Benzinha
Thank for the correction, much appreaciated :)
Still browsing for artists - hahaha!
posted by
Lotus_Flower
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August 10, 2008
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maybe "AND all the friends you had....."
that's what you meant?
Another songwriter's delight....so which artists have you contacted so far?? heh heh heh hehh
posted by
benzinha
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August 10, 2008
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Life is hard and ...
... good, back and forth. How do we handle the ups and downs? People are people, it's all the time how we manage to handle them and the situations - your poem faces the hard/down side; that's one of the important rules to learn -
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
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August 10, 2008
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Harderup, it's tough when you meet people like this...about all one can do
is walk away from them...ignore them.
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..a powerful write...
posted by
Rumor
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August 10, 2008
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stand strong
posted by
lustorlove
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August 10, 2008
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I like this poem. I think people will do what they will, when this happens I just protect my heart! sam
posted by
sam444
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August 10, 2008
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yes yes i hear the thinking place is a much less painful thing please please do
forgive me
posted by
Smittenheimer
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August 10, 2008
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Troosha - Re: Harderup
Yes, sometimes the truth is over-rated :)
posted by
Lotus_Flower
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August 10, 2008
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Harderup
... sometimes we prefer to function on a
need-to-know basis.....and sometimes that's OK.
posted by
Troosha
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August 10, 2008
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Nice Poem.......
I feel like this sometimes myself.
posted by
Kolekshuns
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August 10, 2008
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vobrly?
posted by
Lotus_Flower
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August 10, 2008
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That is plainly vobrly
posted by
Kayzzaman
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August 10, 2008
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That's the problem with people we love....they'll end up doing what they feel is right no matter how much we disagree with them...and they push us away when we don't follow their ideals. Not all the time, but when it does happen....it's not easy to stick around is it? We all need to let go sometimes.....I wish I knew how.
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NiteTide
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August 10, 2008
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