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enjoyed this so much, very, very good.

posted by jeansaw on August 14, 2008 at 9:02 PM | link to this | reply

This reminds me of a guy I used to feel this way about.
 Great writing.

posted by Kolekshuns on August 10, 2008 at 10:14 PM | link to this | reply

Tell me Why

A beautiful exploration of love and friendship.  Very well done

Joe

posted by SFJoseph on August 10, 2008 at 8:38 PM | link to this | reply

Very touching!

posted by Nautikos on August 10, 2008 at 7:54 PM | link to this | reply

been there done that

posted by Lanetay on August 10, 2008 at 3:58 PM | link to this | reply

Hello Sinome! I was so taken with this poem! I have been missing an old friend and this expressed everything for me. It is amazing how the time slips by and suddenly they come to mind for no particular reason. This line was great resolution for me: 
friendship , of all those kinds...is the sweetest one.
It was indeed one of those friendships! Have a wonderful day and my blessings to you.  Shelly xoxoox

[I am at my daughter's house and on her computer, it is so different than my set up. We are having a great time though. She has an outing planned for tomorrow and she is certain I will write a poem about it! I won't let her down! lol]

posted by sam444 on August 10, 2008 at 12:15 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
Some people just run for the hills when they sense love unfolding – it’s as though they fear all its complications.  But in doing so they sometimes miss out on is the basics – friendship.  And that’s a damn shame….

posted by Troosha on August 10, 2008 at 8:44 AM | link to this | reply

friendship is the sweetest
and often least dangerous too...piano music in my head, Sinome

posted by Luz_Briar on August 10, 2008 at 6:30 AM | link to this | reply

Such a touching and tender poem. Loves walk is many colors, and your poem shines.Flower

posted by yellowrose55 on August 10, 2008 at 5:24 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely, very well expressed

posted by Kayzzaman on August 10, 2008 at 5:16 AM | link to this | reply

sinome, I postd you on my page, because this weekend I celebrate with my
friends and it' my friend's week!!!!!!

posted by Star5_ on August 10, 2008 at 4:56 AM | link to this | reply

You can never love enough. Even if you are just ment to be friends. Bitter-sweet. I know how you feel.

posted by Lotus_Flower on August 10, 2008 at 2:41 AM | link to this | reply

Love

I admire people who write poetry..to say so much in so few words is a miracle of heart and mind. Thank you for reminding me about Love and God. It may be one and the same but are the only things worthwhile in life...and they come in various shapes. Nevere be afraid of loving someone..even if you think it hurts...you know, love never hurts...something else does..

lots of love

posted by Yossarian on August 10, 2008 at 1:53 AM | link to this | reply

...I don't know if I should cry or sigh at this poem.  Perhaps both....this was so beautifully touching...and a good reminder of all the different kinds of love...even the painful kind. 

posted by NiteTide on August 9, 2008 at 11:49 PM | link to this | reply