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Great write you will have to stop cause losing it can hurt.

posted by Mystereo on December 19, 2008 at 9:38 PM | link to this | reply

mm liking that you sit  now loveand dance  make love   (gapcohen's Nike slogan) placed
here

posted by Smittenheimer on August 11, 2008 at 12:20 AM | link to this | reply

Joe

It's always a pleasure to read your work.  Well written, and thanks for sharing! - Chris

posted by Marineair on August 10, 2008 at 2:02 AM | link to this | reply

...just breathe.....and believe it will be all right.  This was a lovely poem, Joe.  The rhymes and rhythm were just enchanting, and I had to read it over again, because I enjoyed it so much! 

posted by NiteTide on August 10, 2008 at 1:12 AM | link to this | reply

I love it!

Your words personify so many working stiffs in this country-

posted by mejustme on August 9, 2008 at 10:11 PM | link to this | reply

Good write . Sounds like the quiet desk will unwind the stress!Slowly losing it!

posted by merkie on August 9, 2008 at 12:52 PM | link to this | reply

Love it!!!

Oh, Joe.  Can't I relate!  This was so funny, so perfect.  Thanks for giving me a laugh about our "condition."

posted by sfcookingpoet on August 9, 2008 at 11:22 AM | link to this | reply

Joe, this is fantastic! It is the plight of the worker. The alliteration was fabulous and the cadence and rhyme superb! sam

posted by sam444 on August 9, 2008 at 9:24 AM | link to this | reply

SF

Cheer up - it's Saturday - maybe you can put all the sh--t behind you for a day or two....

posted by Troosha on August 9, 2008 at 9:16 AM | link to this | reply

I am sorry you are feeling so down,  I hope you feel better soon.  This poem is excellent though, with your usual flair you have depicted what most of us have felt at one time or another.  You are such a master at portraying feelings.  Some poets are good at imagery, some are more versed ( no pon intended :-)) in describing emotions... and then  there are some like you that combine both abilities to blow us all away.  Bravo my friend.  Great poem.

posted by Sinome on August 9, 2008 at 7:14 AM | link to this | reply