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Purple
Today I found your closing lines a powerful message - sometimes we
are our own worst enemy.
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Troosha
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August 9, 2008
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What a remarkable poem... you rock!
posted by
Lotus_Flower
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August 9, 2008
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you got a handsome guy's picture........
posted by
9STAR
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August 9, 2008
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I guess I am lost, your poetry, to me has made a change, its too deep
posted by
lustorlove
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August 9, 2008
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Your mind is fantastic. Such revealing imagination!! Thanks.
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EX_TURPI
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August 9, 2008
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Thank you for your comment.
Very great comment, especially the conclusion that man you were describing wasn't the man in the photo staring at the sunset. Great message.
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coolacen
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August 9, 2008
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Very interesting, Purple_Mermaid. I don't give up easily. You never know when I just might make a last ditch effort when everyone thinks I've given up.
posted by
TAPS.
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August 8, 2008
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You never know how strong you are until you carry the weight
posted by
skye08
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August 8, 2008
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This dear, is like Purple
who so beautifully brings out the story of the inner strength of man. I loved it
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
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August 8, 2008
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Re: patman666 dear...
sometimes when we feel surrendering in life's tribulations something inside us refuse to give in...or sometimes we make things harder than it is by complicating them rater than dealing with them, making us more of an enemy to ourselves rather than ally. We can never under estimate what lies within ourselves even if at times we feel there is nothing left in us to work on in life...thank you so much dear patman...it's a privilege to hear from you dear...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
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August 8, 2008
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It's great, well written but hard to get, especiaasly after the ending.
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Sudanym_
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August 8, 2008
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