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i like your style
please give us more!
posted by
muley12
on August 9, 2008 at 11:15 AM
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Totally dig your style of writing
A fragmented mind shows genius in my experience. I personally relate very well to this sort of writing, and follow it with ease. Totally love it. Gimmie more.
posted by
Logan_R
on August 8, 2008 at 8:35 PM
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Absolutely grand!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 8, 2008 at 2:26 PM
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I'm amazed that the more I read about love, there is so much more that is
written and so much more that can be written
posted by
Straightforward
on August 8, 2008 at 9:31 AM
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Beautiful poem. Great job!
posted by
Sinome
on August 7, 2008 at 9:03 PM
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I like an open ending, well done! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 7, 2008 at 3:42 PM
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ooooo!
The heat rides upon the waves
Of Passion burning above the skin
fantastic passion
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 7, 2008 at 3:29 PM
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Great structure of the poem.
Good job.
posted by
coolacen
on August 7, 2008 at 5:50 AM
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