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Wiley, Smitten, and Patman
THANKS!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 7, 2008 at 8:57 PM
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posted by
Sudanym_
on August 7, 2008 at 3:24 PM
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most awesome addition you will be for
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posted by
Smittenheimer
on August 7, 2008 at 9:29 AM
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Luz Briar
That is a lovely conclusion to your poetry collection luv
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 7, 2008 at 8:40 AM
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Safriyie
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for visitng.
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 6, 2008 at 7:00 PM
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Rumored, thanks
so much for your support. thank you for always updating 'Rumored Humor' to make us laugh!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 6, 2008 at 7:00 PM
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safrivie took the words right out of my mouth, Luz..powerful stuff,
as always....
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posted by
Rumor
on August 6, 2008 at 6:31 PM
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"Wrap your arms about yourself
Before your plummet into hell"
hmmm... that was an interesting line. It got me smiling a bit. Sophie.
posted by
safriyie
on August 6, 2008 at 3:21 PM
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Thanks, Bel!!! :)
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 6, 2008 at 2:30 PM
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WOW!
This is wonderful.
posted by
Bel_
on August 6, 2008 at 2:15 PM
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Thanks, Troosha! :)
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 6, 2008 at 2:09 PM
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You had me with...
The similarity is acidic.
posted by
Troosha
on August 6, 2008 at 9:49 AM
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You are welcome! You are an excellent writer! sammy
posted by
sam444
on August 6, 2008 at 9:28 AM
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Sam444
i'm so glad you think it's worth publishing!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 6, 2008 at 9:25 AM
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Such truth for me:
But the similarity
Sings an ancient song
Congratulations on completion! Get a publisher and get it in a book store for the world to enjoy! sammy
posted by
sam444
on August 6, 2008 at 9:07 AM
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