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I really enjoyed this poem.

posted by gapcohen on August 6, 2008 at 8:28 PM | link to this | reply

I remember.

Wonderful remembrances, beautifully expressed.  A lovely poem. 

Joe

posted by SFJoseph on August 6, 2008 at 7:53 PM | link to this | reply

Your reflections and ...

... sensing of what this life is all about have a good start in this poem -  - genio

posted by ggXpress on August 6, 2008 at 10:20 AM | link to this | reply

Harderup

What a wonderful poem - a slow, methodical progression through life.  This first verse struck a chord with me as those were thoughts I had as a child...  Extremely well done! 

posted by Troosha on August 6, 2008 at 9:43 AM | link to this | reply

posted by merkie on August 6, 2008 at 8:59 AM | link to this | reply

posted by lovelyladymonk on August 6, 2008 at 8:51 AM | link to this | reply

I remember

This was just wonderful.  It was very pleasing and moving, and brought up memories for me, and I expect for all your readers.

posted by sfcookingpoet on August 6, 2008 at 8:18 AM | link to this | reply

I think this is a very strong line: I remember the freedom of being free We must never forget and always strive to be fee! sam

posted by sam444 on August 6, 2008 at 8:11 AM | link to this | reply

Nice work. Reads like song lyrics. I hope you'll find a musician

and see what they can do with this one. Seems to me it's got universal appeal. :)pat

posted by Pat_B on August 6, 2008 at 8:11 AM | link to this | reply

indeed :)

I remember the shame of being ashamed

me too, my friend. me too.

posted by Luz_Briar on August 6, 2008 at 7:29 AM | link to this | reply

"the maturing of being mature"...remembering life as being beautiful

no matter what.- there is maturity in that statement a lot of people never reach.....

posted by Rumor on August 6, 2008 at 7:23 AM | link to this | reply

Great phrase:

'the shame of being shamed'

thanks for sharing

posted by malcolm on August 6, 2008 at 6:05 AM | link to this | reply

Superb summary of life and growing up my friend!

very well done; thank you and God bless

posted by mariaki on August 6, 2008 at 5:28 AM | link to this | reply

Life is beautiful indeed .

posted by afzal50 on August 6, 2008 at 5:00 AM | link to this | reply