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Whoa! Sorry it took so long to find the rest of your work I'll read. Awsome
posted by
Mystereo
on December 19, 2008 at 9:58 PM
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Once again, you cease to amaze me with your play on words. Your alliteration is just fantastic! You are just so clever!
posted by
NiteTide
on August 10, 2008 at 1:16 AM
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This is beautiful, SF... simply beautiful.
posted by
Troosha
on August 6, 2008 at 9:48 AM
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I love the use of alliteration. Not ready for winter but this is great! The cadence was excellent! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 6, 2008 at 6:33 AM
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This poem softly murmurs to me
what a fabulous, peaceful piece. Great job!
posted by
lionreign
on August 6, 2008 at 3:39 AM
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Beautiful poem Joseph... I loved the coolness that it evokes in my mind and the images in it catapulting me to winter from the middle of the heat of summer. Great work!
posted by
Sinome
on August 5, 2008 at 10:01 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on August 5, 2008 at 9:16 PM
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bravo
i'm about to reread it. i was just so impressed with the way there was not one harsh sound to be found throughout this poem.
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 5, 2008 at 8:18 PM
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