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Hat off! You write well that why your work is easy to read. You are deep.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 19, 2008 at 10:03 PM
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What a sterling way to see the eyes! I love the path it took to the conclusion and it so warmed my heart! Bravo I say! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 5, 2008 at 9:58 AM
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From your first line I became curious as to the path of your poem because your first line implied two different ways to go: Love or Hate. Because, for me, I took the line "Through your eyes my soul does wander" as someone seeing the speaker as a philanderer, the first time around, and then the possibility of the soul going on a journey within the other's eyes came about as the second perception. I was intrigued and was delighted to find that it was the journey through another's soul rather than something spiteful. I loved it!
posted by
NiteTide
on August 5, 2008 at 1:21 AM
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Wow... this is so romantic, so intimate and sweet... Beautifully written Bravo Joseph!!!!
posted by
Sinome
on August 4, 2008 at 9:13 PM
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