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Re:
Thanks, Spinner. Afraid I have a propensity for rhyming.
posted by
sfcookingpoet
on August 1, 2008 at 5:30 PM
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Why do you think you are not a poet?
posted by
EX_TURPI
on August 1, 2008 at 2:40 PM
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Not bad ...
w rite and you’ll get better. In any event you’ll have fun love. With TLC, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”
posted by
BC-A
on August 1, 2008 at 5:30 AM
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Young Poet
Hi Deborah. Welcome to Blogit, my friend. I thought the poem was great. I loved the rhyme, and I loved the humor. I am so pleased that you have come to join our Blogit family. You have a poets soul. Write on!
Joe 
posted by
SFJoseph
on July 31, 2008 at 5:57 PM
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I am with Spinner! Very cool! Keep writing poet! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 31, 2008 at 4:24 PM
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you could have fooled hell out of me, Though there was a lot of rhyme, rhyme, rhyme it really worked well for this poem, great job
posted by
spinner
on July 31, 2008 at 3:21 PM
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Don't shoot at ...
... the poet - you may hit yourself -
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
on July 31, 2008 at 1:18 PM
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