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Thankfully it doesn't happen often but I've been there. Great poem loved

the imagery and frustrated emotion.  Kris

posted by ChristianHorrorWriter on August 2, 2008 at 10:03 PM | link to this | reply | report abuse

Awesome

Awesome imagery! I hope you will visit me again soon

posted by HisAngel1981 on July 31, 2008 at 7:33 PM | link to this | reply | report abuse

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on August 7, 2008 at 6:33 PM | link to this | reply

oops, I hit enter accidentially before I was done typing..

I pray for blessings to flow your way and that God may give you peace and rest in Him.

Teri

I do have a question, how do you insert graphics and pictures in your writings?

posted by GoWithTheFlow_Journal on August 6, 2008 at 10:39 PM | link to this | reply

Poem...

I

posted by GoWithTheFlow_Journal on August 6, 2008 at 10:36 PM | link to this | reply

blessiings to you... and i hope love and light comes back in your everyday real soon...

posted by gold_dust on August 5, 2008 at 9:53 AM | link to this | reply

I worry about you my dear. Just close your eyes and let God in

you may find yourself able to sleep cradled in his love.

posted by Kabu on August 2, 2008 at 6:18 AM | link to this | reply

good writing....good luck with the sleeping problem

posted by Samantha39 on August 1, 2008 at 11:53 PM | link to this | reply

My Darling

My darling your words a beautiful. 

I hope you get some rest,

I hope it is the best

I will say a prayer or two

Just for you 

That you'll pass this test. 

Be Blessed

posted by Color_Your_Life on August 1, 2008 at 12:47 PM | link to this | reply

Wait a minute!

If the half-sleep produces work like this, maybe you should hold off on the pills.

Carl Peter

posted by cpklapper on July 31, 2008 at 5:23 AM | link to this | reply

No pills while I got BEER! Double shifts got me!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on July 30, 2008 at 1:31 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful poem sweet mermaid.  I am so sorry you are having trouble sleeping my sweet Jen... perhaps a side effect from one of your medications.  I can't imagine it could be anything else.  Sweet hearts like you are supposed to sleep well... hmmm I will have to have a talk to the Boss next time I pray.  Take care of you.  xoxo

posted by Sinome on July 30, 2008 at 12:44 PM | link to this | reply

Purple

posted by Troosha on July 30, 2008 at 10:40 AM | link to this | reply

I can understand

Sleep is a precious commodity that eludes us many nights. A beautiful write that captures the essence of sleepless nights.  May you be surrounded by the Light of Love, Peace for your soul and rest for your body.

posted by skye08 on July 30, 2008 at 9:10 AM | link to this | reply

The sufferer only knows what insomnia is

posted by Kayzzaman on July 30, 2008 at 5:59 AM | link to this | reply

We should NEVER look back my dear Jen

unless it's on fond memories; excellent work my friend; thank you, take care and God bless always

posted by mariaki on July 30, 2008 at 3:40 AM | link to this | reply

You so captured the essence of how some nights we just toss and turn...Wonderful!

posted by Wigopa_ on July 29, 2008 at 11:16 PM | link to this | reply

it is a very good description of how insomnia feels

posted by Luz_Briar on July 29, 2008 at 10:23 PM | link to this | reply

Hope you will find your pills

Love your description of the dream. No logic, no sense, fragments of our thoughts from the day before.

posted by Lotus_Flower on July 29, 2008 at 9:49 PM | link to this | reply

bad dreams

posted by lustorlove on July 29, 2008 at 8:22 PM | link to this | reply

Dear Jen, this touched me... sometimes yes, we don't have to look 'back' --- just forward, straight ahead and seek Peace at the crossroad ~ ~ Elyse *thank you for my calling cards Angel. xoxox

posted by elysianfields on July 29, 2008 at 8:16 PM | link to this | reply

marvelous and beautiful journey - bless   you

posted by Smittenheimer on July 29, 2008 at 6:51 PM | link to this | reply

posted by yellowrose55 on July 29, 2008 at 6:38 PM | link to this | reply

passion in eventide penned with emotional excellence, love. With TLC, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”

posted by BC-A on July 29, 2008 at 6:38 PM | link to this | reply

Thinking of you

posted by shelly_b on July 29, 2008 at 5:59 PM | link to this | reply

This is kind of heartbreaking, Jen.

I have been able to let go of the past.
I hope that you will find your way too.

posted by Sunnybeach7 on July 29, 2008 at 5:53 PM | link to this | reply

posted by lovelyladymonk on July 29, 2008 at 5:37 PM | link to this | reply