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Alone again naturally … Gilbert O’ Sullivan 70s. With TLC, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”
posted by
BC-A
on July 28, 2008 at 6:32 AM
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Good for You
I pray that your father will guide you to a new life of love and happiness, peace, prosperity, and in time forgiveness. Forgiveness is your life lesson to learn so that you won't have to repeat this pain in a future lifetime. Forgiveness brings complete freedom, peace, harmony and the fullness of your soul. May you be blessed each day with the rising of the sun and the rising of the moon. May your true happiness and love rise to meet you on your path of truth and love.
posted by
skye08
on July 27, 2008 at 11:19 PM
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Great poem
posted by
Kayzzaman
on July 27, 2008 at 9:42 PM
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Umph!!
Now this was the shit here!! I love the line "You lost it all, tryin to have it all"!! Killa stanza! Keep that pen moving brother!!
posted by
Hank29
on July 27, 2008 at 9:15 PM
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Sometimes revenge is sweet
even if it just covers the real pain. Glad you got
some justice. Good luck
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on July 27, 2008 at 9:12 PM
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Wow Clay!~!! Good for you man, finally you tell her off as she deserves... Great poem... Now forget her and go on my friend.
posted by
Sinome
on July 27, 2008 at 9:08 PM
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