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Re: NiteTide
Hi Mindy. Things in my life are going well, thank you so much for asking. My muse just spoke to me of all the people in the world, throughout history, who have been in hopeless situations, and how the lives that they dream must surely be the only thing in their lives that are not filled with despair. Thanks as always for your kind remarks. Its so good to have you back and reading/writing/commenting.
Joe 
posted by
SFJoseph
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July 30, 2008
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Awww, this is such a heart breaking re-make!!
I hope it is just a poem and that all things in your life are going well!
posted by
NiteTide
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July 30, 2008
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superb
Now I lay me down to sleep,
I pray to drown in dreaming sleep,
If what is real I can't remake,
I pray to die before I wake.
posted by
Luz_Briar
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July 28, 2008
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A rather poignant poem! I can relate totally especially when my migraines are beyond tolerable, like today! sam
posted by
sam444
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July 28, 2008
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OK Dad...I think you are being to hard on your self...Awesome write!!
posted by
Wigopa_
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July 27, 2008
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Hopeless maybe, yes ~ but heartfelt search and awareness --- this is powerful and its emotion is raw and palpable.
Elyse (touched me)
posted by
elysianfields
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July 27, 2008
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Drown in dreaming sleep
Poor guy...
Lovely poem
posted by
Lotus_Flower
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July 27, 2008
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9:23 PM
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what an amazing thrill ride - this popped. Thank you for sharing it
posted by
Smittenheimer
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July 27, 2008
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Amazing poem Joseph, moving and sad...I just loved it!
posted by
Sinome
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July 27, 2008
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Beautiful!
posted by
_teddypoet_
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July 27, 2008
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5:25 PM
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