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Aww, that is so sweet, thank you
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on July 26, 2008 at 7:05 AM
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I'm sure that none who are touched by your charms could ever do nothing but miss you
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 26, 2008 at 6:03 AM
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Thank you Sam
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on July 25, 2008 at 8:19 AM
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I'd like to welcome you too! When you travel a bit (litteraly speaking as well as metaphorically) you realise how true it is that life's full of irony! You certainly have a nice way with words. Keep the "good wor
kd"! LOL
posted by
auslander
on July 25, 2008 at 8:19 AM
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I love this one! The ending really was astounding, but I fancied these lines:
You wanted kids and a lovely wife
I wanted freedom and a crazy life
I love my kids to bits, but this was so enticing! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 25, 2008 at 8:13 AM
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You have a way with words m'am.... Very nice
posted by
VictoriaP
on July 25, 2008 at 6:12 AM
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Ah, we all have regrets, don't we?
posted by
midget34
on July 25, 2008 at 5:25 AM
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Marvelous...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 25, 2008 at 5:15 AM
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A relevant issue for Sophisticated Ladies (Duke Ellington) and moms everywhere love. lol, BCA, “Top of the Stairs” 
posted by
BC-A
on July 25, 2008 at 5:10 AM
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So often true of our lives. We think it is this and then it is that but in the end we get what we needed not always what what we wanted. It is then a challenge to mold and be molded until there is a perfect fit. This is nice.
posted by
Justi
on July 25, 2008 at 3:03 AM
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This has such appeal
I think we have all felt something similar, but you phrase is so gracefully - Well done
posted by
lionreign
on July 25, 2008 at 2:11 AM
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Thank you all :)
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on July 25, 2008 at 1:17 AM
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aw this one's so nice and fluent. i'm adding you to my favorites
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 24, 2008 at 10:53 PM
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that is a beautiful poem, I could feel some of my own past experiences when I read it....(not about my ex-husband, but about true, REAL love before him)
posted by
mejustme
on July 24, 2008 at 9:28 PM
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Passionate !
posted by
afzal50
on July 24, 2008 at 8:58 PM
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yep, life's like that..full of unexpected twists and irony...
a great write.
....and welcome to Blogit....
posted by
Rumor
on July 24, 2008 at 7:48 PM
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Beautiful poem ... Life can be very ironic, can't it? Unfortunately the things we regret are usually the ones we did not do, not the ones we did. I want to join the others in welcoming you to our little crazy corner of the Web...
posted by
Sinome2
on July 24, 2008 at 7:35 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on July 24, 2008 at 5:39 PM
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I joined in February...
...and it has taken over my life until recently.
I still have difficulty pushing away from the computer, but, I have to mind my 'real' existence before things get out of hand.
posted by
metalrat
on July 24, 2008 at 5:27 PM
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Thank you too :)
This is a new world for me - very addictive I must add - lol
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on July 24, 2008 at 5:07 PM
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By the way...
...welcome to blogit, and thank you for visiting my post today.
posted by
metalrat
on July 24, 2008 at 5:05 PM
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Life is a study in ironies, large and small...
...and your poem describes a common, yet, poignant irony.
posted by
metalrat
on July 24, 2008 at 5:03 PM
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Meaningful!!!!!!!!!!
posted by
NiqueKennon
on July 24, 2008 at 3:52 PM
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