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wow - you delivered with this fine prose
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 26, 2008 at 6:04 AM
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beautiful, such sweet joy in sadness
posted by
skye08
on July 24, 2008 at 3:21 PM
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Beautiful!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 24, 2008 at 8:43 AM
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I'm laying in the grass...
This is a lovely poem! I enjoyed it very much!
posted by
Oosthuizen
on July 24, 2008 at 6:49 AM
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Very nice poem and somewhat related to the difficulty of my friend; not being what she thought or wanted him to be.
posted by
auslander
on July 24, 2008 at 4:43 AM
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Terrific!
Begins charmingly and ends disturbingly love! And even the single mom, separated, and divorced women should find the right one as early as possible. They should plant a good tree instead of trying out cheap trees from the street fair that uproot. lol, BCA, “Top of the Stairs” 
posted by
BC-A
on July 24, 2008 at 3:39 AM
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This is lovely, Harderup
posted by
Kayzzaman
on July 24, 2008 at 1:01 AM
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