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epic and magical

posted by Smittenheimer on July 27, 2008 at 9:45 PM | link to this | reply

What a journey this brings me through...just excellent and I like the way you eloquently voiced and arranged this. ~ Elyse (write on!!!)

posted by elysianfields on July 27, 2008 at 11:59 AM | link to this | reply

fantasy and feeling alive turned into a shared reality. Awesome flight!

posted by merkie on July 24, 2008 at 12:42 PM | link to this | reply

A marvelous piece my dear!

well worth the effort and full of poweful imagery and truths; thank you and God bless

posted by mariaki on July 24, 2008 at 5:21 AM | link to this | reply

This poem should be studied by all who wish to know what real poetry is about. Your talent is supernatural

posted by DeeJay101 on July 24, 2008 at 3:23 AM | link to this | reply

I have chills...

this is that good.  I can't praise it highly enough.

 

And Mindy accused me of being the romantic

posted by lionreign on July 24, 2008 at 2:44 AM | link to this | reply

Exquisite imagery, the cadence- outstanding!  sam

posted by sam444 on July 23, 2008 at 9:59 PM | link to this | reply

A wonderful realization full of yesterdays and tomorrows, love this poem, it speaks from the

heart.

posted by yellowrose55 on July 23, 2008 at 9:13 PM | link to this | reply

You put a lot into this and it shows... incredible effort marineair...

posted by VictoriaP on July 23, 2008 at 8:16 PM | link to this | reply

Re: NiteTide

I'm glad you liked it, Mindy.  I wrote it a year out of college, but it's still relevant today.  Not just pertaining to love, but our return to innocence if we want.  It's always there if we choose to let it be a part of our lives.  I'm living proof that it works.

posted by Marineair on July 23, 2008 at 6:26 PM | link to this | reply

Wow.  That's all that's flitting through my head right now: WOW.  For love to have that kind of affect - which brings you back to childhood - which raises you back up again - is astounding...and I am just in: wow.

posted by NiteTide on July 23, 2008 at 6:23 PM | link to this | reply