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sweet - abominations rock
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 23, 2008 at 7:45 PM
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Swiift is right! Loved this one! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 23, 2008 at 1:33 PM
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Decisions about ...
... how, when or why to act or not - right or wrong - is a difficult theme (as I understand your poem) - I like the poem, makes me wonder and ask within.
posted by
ggXpress
on July 23, 2008 at 5:41 AM
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Concise and precise
like a sword thrust, my friend. I love the clarity you achieve with so few words.
posted by
lionreign
on July 23, 2008 at 4:50 AM
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Exactly!
Take care, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”
posted by
BC-A
on July 23, 2008 at 4:23 AM
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Short, succinct & to the point..my favorite style :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on July 22, 2008 at 9:02 PM
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Loved this...
short and poignant
posted by
Sinome
on July 22, 2008 at 6:31 PM
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