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This was very clear!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on July 23, 2008 at 3:24 PM
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I picked up this line before I read your explanation at the bottom. I love this:
An endless swirl of an inebriated embrace, it could be an intoxication of whatever I wanted. Love it when the imagery is all mine when I read! Great effort! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 23, 2008 at 12:45 PM
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Satisfying and revealing.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on July 23, 2008 at 6:55 AM
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I loved this poem...it felt like it should :-) and I also love the way you explain things to your readers... the consideration that denotes, the wonderful generous gesture of "here is a part of my soul for you to disect, lemme help you if I can" You are a sweet person:-) Great job.
posted by
Sinome
on July 22, 2008 at 4:41 PM
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Yep! Appreciated!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on July 22, 2008 at 3:26 PM
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