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Now I really feel you on this I see this some time.
posted by
Mystereo
on January 4, 2009 at 5:40 AM
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ReJust found your comment--Thank you so much Smittenheimer! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on August 10, 2008 at 12:45 PM
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very nice
bless you
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 31, 2008 at 7:47 PM
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Oh darlin'! You are such a beautiful soul. I am glad some things are moving along. I hope your son seeks therapy! Heaven knows what a benefit it can be, especially with the road you have traveled! Love you so! sam
Thank you so for the Haiku, you brought joyful tears to my eyes! I have taken a copy if that is okay. Thank you darlin' Chris!
posted by
sam444
on July 31, 2008 at 7:01 AM
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Re: Hello Sam--Yes everything is ok-thank you for your concern.I've had my
Son over from Sweden-with two of my Grandchildren-it was Wonderfu! My other married Son I feel-I am concerned about and therefore I have written one to one-out lining my concerns and gently indicating the possibility of him seeking Counselling! It threw me for a few days but all's well.He has taken 'kindly' to my letter and going to seek guidance.
I just feel in a 'ponderous mood'? I can't 'settle' easily but WILL RETURN when I feel less 'cluttered up inside'! Hope that makes sense? Thank you again Sam-so very much! God Bless-Love Chris.x This Haiku's for you.
grace-wisdom and love
creates the spiritual Sam
god shines within you
posted by
Scramble
on July 29, 2008 at 2:07 PM
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Hello Chris! Is everything okay? I need a Haiku fix! I hope everything is okay! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 26, 2008 at 11:02 AM
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Re: Many thanks Sinome! Chris:)
posted by
Scramble
on July 23, 2008 at 2:21 PM
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:-) so well captured...the essence of summer Great Haiku Chris Bravo!
posted by
Sinome
on July 22, 2008 at 6:29 PM
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Re: Sounds like a summer's day in the UK Chris!
A Summer's Evening/Night actually mariaki! Many thanks to you! God bless.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 21, 2008 at 1:19 PM
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Re: Many thanks indeed wigopa! I'm glad you liked it. Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 21, 2008 at 1:18 PM
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Re: Oh how Lovely of you sam444-to explain the 'core' of your poem! I
do apreciate that-Thank you.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 21, 2008 at 1:18 PM
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Re: Beautiful image...
Very many thanks Marineair! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 21, 2008 at 1:16 PM
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Re: This is very good...
Thank you so much vickip! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 21, 2008 at 1:15 PM
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Re: Scramble
Yes Troosha-great fun watching and anticipating! Many thanks.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 21, 2008 at 1:14 PM
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Re: scramble
I'm pleased you think so Lilane! Thanks.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 21, 2008 at 1:13 PM
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Re: Thank you so much sam444! God bless.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 21, 2008 at 1:13 PM
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Sounds like a summer's day in the UK Chris!
nice one; thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on July 21, 2008 at 3:44 AM
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Stunning and vivid imagery..Awesome post!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 20, 2008 at 11:45 PM
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Hello Chris! I came to bring you an answer to the dream poem! I am happy I got you! sam
Side bar: The poem has a true incident in it. The bridge I allude to is in the Straits Of Mackinac ( mac-i-naw) and the Mackinac Bridge ( a 5 mile suspension bridge connecting the upper and lower peninsulas of Michigan). About 15 years ago I kept having this recurring dream of an object (for lack of a better word) falling and it was abyss like). A stormy November, the gales are treacherous at that time, a Yugo was crossing the bridge. A gust came up from the grates and threw it over the side. It was recovered in 250' of water. At that time gust warning were not announced nor miles per hour. That is now in effect. After the incident I did not have the dream again. It stayed with me because it was so uncanny. It ended making for a pretty decent poem.
posted by
sam444
on July 20, 2008 at 8:35 PM
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Beautiful image...
- Chris
posted by
Marineair
on July 20, 2008 at 6:01 PM
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This is very good...
posted by
VictoriaP
on July 20, 2008 at 1:21 PM
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Scramble
It's a good game to watch though....
posted by
Troosha
on July 20, 2008 at 1:18 PM
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scramble
how cute
posted by
Lanetay
on July 20, 2008 at 8:45 AM
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Clever, clever, clever! I love it! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 20, 2008 at 8:30 AM
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Re: Chris, you're so good at Haiku! So much said in so few words! Great job!
Hello Ariala-I just popped in quickly and found your comment! How very kind of you-thank you! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 20, 2008 at 7:32 AM
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Chris, you're so good at Haiku! So much said in so few words! Great job!
posted by
Ariala
on July 20, 2008 at 4:37 AM
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