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this was beautiful! i could read it in my head and hear it lyrically, the sign of a truly timeless kind of poem.
and i loved your imagery.
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 19, 2008 at 11:27 AM
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Deep meanings!!
posted by
EX_TURPI
on July 19, 2008 at 11:23 AM
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I thought to be a very strong poem so laden with wonderful imagery! I especially liked:
It stands alone but among a forest of its kind, it so remined me of humanity! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 19, 2008 at 9:37 AM
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You use extremely original imagery that communicate s your message. Take care, BCA, “Top of the Stairs” 
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BC-A
on July 19, 2008 at 4:44 AM
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my dear, you have such a wonderful thoughts and this is very well written...i just fear that just like most new very good writers such as yourself will just go to naught. Welcome to blogit dear...you may not hear much from me for i dont comment much though i read a lot around (i just leave calling cards) but i do hope you find time to read around and leave some comment. People will read you once or twice to get your attention but after that if you dont return the read no one will read your blog no matter how great it is. Ive so many talented writers without any comment at all in their blogs after hours of posting them just coz they dont read other blogs or comment on them. It is pretty much how it works dear...you have a great potential hope you get what you came here for and not be disappointed. peace.......
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on July 19, 2008 at 3:29 AM
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