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Luz, like vickip, I am re-reading it because it is so full....
yes, you are better off without this guy..
- him...
posted by
Rumor
on July 20, 2008 at 1:04 PM
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wow, your prose is just amazing ... I had to read it again and again...
not for lack of understanding, but because it is so full of interesting thoughts to ponder... shaking my head affirmatively in agreement. Awesome write!
posted by
VictoriaP
on July 19, 2008 at 11:40 AM
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Thank you All
it turns out that he went back to his high school sweetheart for the third time.
But I was mistaken to assume it was a new girl. People don't change, and his deceit to me was not nearly as bad as I thought it was.
Thank you for reading, guys.
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 19, 2008 at 10:28 AM
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Some people are not worth our time! I think you are better off and wise to have written it away in a poem! Have a great day! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 19, 2008 at 7:54 AM
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................more luck to you in the future, hon! He doesn't deserve you anyway!
posted by
NiteTide
on July 18, 2008 at 11:02 PM
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I cannot comment at length but it is lovely, excellent post
posted by
Kayzzaman
on July 18, 2008 at 10:04 PM
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