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i like this poem, beautiful
liken
posted by
lyknliken
on July 19, 2008 at 12:40 AM
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I'll read a little more. Thanks.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on July 17, 2008 at 3:32 PM
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Invisible was an excellent close. I alsp liked:
The blessed birth of love
Self-expression
May we all find that! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 17, 2008 at 3:29 PM
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Re: That's one of the deepest poems i've ever read .. thank you.
no doubt - this poem rips
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 17, 2008 at 2:35 PM
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That's one of the deepest poems i've ever read .. thank you.
posted by
Angesom_AG
on July 17, 2008 at 1:37 PM
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Strange-I was going to pick out the line-"in my window of consciousness"-
this is lovely merkie! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 17, 2008 at 12:32 PM
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so much beauty inside
Seeing dreams materializing
In my window of conciousnes
The plesant memories are seducing me
Like silhouettes of primitive desires.
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 17, 2008 at 11:03 AM
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