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Captivating imagery and I too loved the close!  sam

posted by sam444 on July 17, 2008 at 11:41 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely ending!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on July 16, 2008 at 4:06 PM | link to this | reply

most excellent - very cool play on words

posted by Smittenheimer on July 16, 2008 at 3:07 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful picture.

posted by EX_TURPI on July 16, 2008 at 10:06 AM | link to this | reply

Very nice, beautifully written, Joseph

posted by Kayzzaman on July 15, 2008 at 9:45 PM | link to this | reply

Poignant ...

posted by afzal50 on July 15, 2008 at 8:41 PM | link to this | reply

Re: NiteTide

Thank you Mindy for the praise.  I do seem to enjoy telling a story. I feel that many things in this world can be brought into clarity by the use of stories and similes. By the way, I thought I was learning from you! Maybe we can learn from each other.

Joe

posted by SFJoseph on July 15, 2008 at 7:54 PM | link to this | reply

To be inherited by the meek...

That was a fantastic choice of words for the closing.  Loved it!  - Chris

posted by Marineair on July 15, 2008 at 7:45 PM | link to this | reply

This was an amazing piece dealing with the elements of land and sea....and the quiet and patient sand.........I'm constantly surprised how well you bring your poetry together to tell a story.  Man oh man, you are a fine one to learn from.

posted by NiteTide on July 15, 2008 at 7:41 PM | link to this | reply

Wow! i like the way you always wrap your poems up

posted by Luz_Briar on July 15, 2008 at 7:31 PM | link to this | reply