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Captivating imagery and I too loved the close! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 17, 2008 at 11:41 AM
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Lovely ending!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on July 16, 2008 at 4:06 PM
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most excellent - very cool play on words
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 16, 2008 at 3:07 PM
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Beautiful picture.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on July 16, 2008 at 10:06 AM
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Very nice, beautifully written, Joseph
posted by
Kayzzaman
on July 15, 2008 at 9:45 PM
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Poignant ...
posted by
afzal50
on July 15, 2008 at 8:41 PM
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Re: NiteTide
Thank you Mindy for the praise. I do seem to enjoy telling a story. I feel that many things in this world can be brought into clarity by the use of stories and similes. By the way, I thought I was learning from you! Maybe we can learn from each other.
Joe 
posted by
SFJoseph
on July 15, 2008 at 7:54 PM
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To be inherited by the meek...
That was a fantastic choice of words for the closing. Loved it!
- Chris
posted by
Marineair
on July 15, 2008 at 7:45 PM
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This was an amazing piece dealing with the elements of land and sea....and the quiet and patient sand.........I'm constantly surprised how well you bring your poetry together to tell a story. Man oh man, you are a fine one to learn from.
posted by
NiteTide
on July 15, 2008 at 7:41 PM
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Wow! i like the way you always wrap your poems up
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 15, 2008 at 7:31 PM
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