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this was very good and different. thanks for sharing with us
posted by
Samantha39
on July 15, 2008 at 3:01 PM
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very haunting...one wonders if this was a good girl or a demon herself...
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posted by
Rumor
on July 15, 2008 at 2:06 PM
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Poignant and an alluring quality to its substance! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 15, 2008 at 10:31 AM
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I agree with NiteTide (looking under my bed now...
) wow...you have quite a creative muse. I LOVE it. ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 14, 2008 at 10:36 PM
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Excellent!
posted by
Kayzzaman
on July 14, 2008 at 10:21 PM
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My god....that was terrifying.......but I was enthralled to the last line....wow.
posted by
NiteTide
on July 14, 2008 at 8:46 PM
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