Go to Briar Prose: fiction and poetry
- Add a comment
- Go to Poem: the Pool
this was very good and different. thanks for sharing with us
posted by
Samantha39
on
July 15, 2008
at
3:01 PM
| |
reply
very haunting...one wonders if this was a good girl or a demon herself...
..
....
posted by
Rumor
on
July 15, 2008
at
2:06 PM
| |
reply
Poignant and an alluring quality to its substance! sam
posted by
sam444
on
July 15, 2008
at
10:31 AM
| |
reply
I agree with NiteTide (looking under my bed now...
) wow...you have quite a creative muse. I LOVE it. ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on
July 14, 2008
at
10:36 PM
| |
reply
Excellent!
posted by
Kayzzaman
on
July 14, 2008
at
10:21 PM
| |
reply
My god....that was terrifying.......but I was enthralled to the last line....wow.
posted by
NiteTide
on
July 14, 2008
at
8:46 PM
| |
reply
Copy (or write down) this comment's web address (URL), which is:
Next, go to the email or web page where you want to link to this comment, and paste
(or type) the web address.
