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Exccelent! i like! merkie
posted by
merkie
on July 15, 2008 at 9:29 PM
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This is excellent! I love the thought, incredulous! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 15, 2008 at 8:29 AM
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great... i see mote on ray of light
posted by
lyknliken
on July 15, 2008 at 12:33 AM
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"drifting on unseen currents" - fantabulous line!! ....it says a lot about a poem when it has me looking around EVERYWHERE for things I don't catch on a normal basis, after reading your poem.
posted by
NiteTide
on July 14, 2008 at 2:58 PM
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