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heart breaking...

posted by 9STAR on July 13, 2008 at 5:03 AM | link to this | reply

how sad

posted by lustorlove on July 12, 2008 at 1:07 PM | link to this | reply

What an ending

I loved the pic you chose of the eye bleeding masque! Splendid illustration; strong to go with your strong words. My oldness comes out when I started humming in my mind, "Where Have All the Flowers Gone."

Cee

posted by LadyCeeMarie on July 12, 2008 at 9:47 AM | link to this | reply

Pls don't forget Darfur and Zimbabwe in your prayers

Those people are suffering terribly.  I understand that Indonesia is still soffering as well.

posted by Smittenheimer on July 12, 2008 at 9:46 AM | link to this | reply

You have such a beautiful creation with your words filled with emotions.

I believe we have been so numbed with news overload we have become numb to the violence that surrounds us to protect our self.

posted by skye08 on July 12, 2008 at 5:57 AM | link to this | reply

Really good poem...you should try to have that published in that part

of the world.

posted by Ariala on July 12, 2008 at 4:52 AM | link to this | reply

Loved the line...

"Taste the vile impediment of spoiled sentiments".  So wonderfully well worded.  Beautiful poem.  Thank you - Chris

posted by Marineair on July 12, 2008 at 3:44 AM | link to this | reply

Of course this has your signature Passion Jen ~ stunning and so vivid.  It is sad that yes, Africa - so many nations - so many countries and children, elderly - so many go unnoticed as uncared for, neglected and forgotten...it breaks my heart but again, we can only do what we can --- those that can.  May God bless all ~ Elyse Good poem, made me ponder

posted by elysianfields on July 11, 2008 at 10:47 PM | link to this | reply

garddaym, thats a good one... 

posted by Luz_Briar on July 11, 2008 at 8:52 PM | link to this | reply

Indeed ...

"...Taste the incessant torture at hand ..." Purple Mermaid

Excellent! lol, BCA!

 

posted by BC-A on July 11, 2008 at 7:59 PM | link to this | reply

I think they care but nobody wants to talk about it.

posted by shelly_b on July 11, 2008 at 6:03 PM | link to this | reply