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Beautifully said! Kudos!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on July 11, 2008 at 3:50 PM
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I meant to write Mirror...just like me to muck it up
posted by
Kabu
on July 11, 2008 at 1:45 PM
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look into the lirror at your beautiful face and smile
read some of your work and be proud.
posted by
Kabu
on July 11, 2008 at 1:44 PM
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Wow! Explosive imagery. I liked the affirmation! But reality always seems to grab hold. sam
posted by
sam444
on July 11, 2008 at 9:37 AM
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Dark
I'm hoping not all wishes are cold. Sad but very good piece...
posted by
Troosha
on July 11, 2008 at 9:33 AM
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...when i read this i saw a universe of blackest oblivion and the faintest flicker of distant light...and felt how can that little light save me when the emptiness is so large...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on July 11, 2008 at 2:36 AM
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Nice Poem
Some imagination. Love it.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on July 10, 2008 at 10:28 PM
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Thanks for the visit! Keep the faith in a better world!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on July 10, 2008 at 9:30 PM
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A birthday cake of broken dreams and wishes? How very sad, and yet so very beautiful!
posted by
NiteTide
on July 10, 2008 at 8:10 PM
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