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that was a magnificent piece dear sir...great verses!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on July 8, 2008 at 6:22 PM
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Bravo!!
Man that poem was sick!! It's like you were reading the biography of my life!! This is FIYA!!!
posted by
Hank29
on July 8, 2008 at 5:19 PM
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Wow! I found myself right in the poem! Excellent! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 8, 2008 at 11:03 AM
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...so very true my friend...so very true...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on July 8, 2008 at 5:52 AM
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I found it to be so real that it describes everyman .. not a someone else.
posted by
Angesom_AG
on July 8, 2008 at 4:49 AM
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Wow oh wow. I felt like I could FEEL the dejectedness of the man that stood, dressed in dreams with a facade of loneliness about him. That was amazing! And I especially liked this poem because 'facade' is one of my favorite words
posted by
NiteTide
on July 8, 2008 at 12:56 AM
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I agree Dad..I should always look where I leap..LOL..Awesome as always..You go Dad!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 7, 2008 at 10:28 PM
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I agree Dad..I should always look where I leap..Great as always..
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 7, 2008 at 10:28 PM
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ABsolutely beautiful Joseph... Wow..."dressed in dreams..." that line alone is worth the whole poem and there are so many others worth mentioning... The poem is amazing both in content and form. Bravo!!
posted by
Sinome
on July 7, 2008 at 10:28 PM
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Yes, Poignant!!~ Stirring and Succinct! (always offering 'wisdom') ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 7, 2008 at 9:55 PM
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You never know what someone is going through just by looking at their
face ... very good, and so true
posted by
VictoriaP
on July 7, 2008 at 8:54 PM
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Poignant ....
posted by
afzal50
on July 7, 2008 at 8:45 PM
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