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sam444
thanks so much for reading it a 2nd time. nothing's more flattering to a writer
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 22, 2008 at 8:41 PM
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As a reader I am comfortable with the way the story opens. I like how you introduced the past to set the predicament. I thought everything in this segment belonged there. I was especially taken with the set up his eyes! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 22, 2008 at 4:13 PM
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I have had my own misfortunes in my youth and today I battle with disassociate behavior syndrome! This subject matter is good because the misdeeds to children can impact a life forever. I will do the best I can on reading but may have to leave calling cards, it will have nothing to do with your writing but more with the fact I just don't say much in this area! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 12, 2008 at 7:39 AM
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I can already imagine
I am going to enjoy reading this.
I hope you enjoy mine
posted by
DRKnight
on July 9, 2008 at 6:36 PM
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