Comments on Haiku----------------------------------------------------------------------

Go to Chris' Haiku and Poetry.Add a commentGo to Haiku----------------------------------------------------------------------

You are so creative and so good with Haiku ~ the inspired moments are captured so well by you ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on July 5, 2008 at 8:41 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Superb, Chris! - Ash
Very many thank you's Ash! Chris.

posted by Scramble on July 1, 2008 at 5:47 AM | link to this | reply

Superb, Chris! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on June 30, 2008 at 7:45 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Re: I'm pleased that you loved that particular line wigopa-many thanks.Yes-
Wigopa--you're welcome! I have four/five I wrote over week end-but-they don't feel right-(perhaps some of these things depend upon our own moods?) God Bless. Chris.

posted by Scramble on June 30, 2008 at 1:25 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Haiku
Many thanks Kolekshuns! Chris.

posted by Scramble on June 30, 2008 at 1:23 PM | link to this | reply

Haiku
 Great poem. 

posted by Kolekshuns on June 29, 2008 at 9:11 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: I'm pleased that you loved that particular line wigopa-many thanks.Yes-
Thank you Chris...I fills my heart with warmth that you would say these things that I need to hear...I haven't even looked at a pen and paper for a day or so now..I have noticed too that there are times when I think "ummm I could pen this"...Then I change my mind a move on...not thinking it is the right thing to write about..I go to the next and change my mind there too...So many thanks for the kind words Chris..Thank you!

posted by Wigopa_ on June 29, 2008 at 12:09 AM | link to this | reply

Chris, yep, it's always "mind over matter" when we write...:)
although some days my brain doesn't line up properly......

posted by Rumor on June 28, 2008 at 10:58 AM | link to this | reply

Re: I'm pleased that you loved that particular line wigopa-many thanks.Yes-
I and I'm sure others too-go through patches of finding it hard to find 'new thoughts and feelings'-to write about! I must say-I realy LOVE all your writings.So Spiritual and 'magical'! It will get easier--try not to 'push yourself' too hard-for that makes writing even more difficult! Don't worry-that's the last thing you should do--it WILL all come back-(easier)-Have a great week end.Chris.

posted by Scramble on June 27, 2008 at 1:30 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Scramble
Many thanks indeed Troosha! Have a great week end.Chris.

posted by Scramble on June 27, 2008 at 1:25 PM | link to this | reply

Re: scramble
Thank you so much Lilane! Chris.

posted by Scramble on June 27, 2008 at 1:24 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Very clever Chris!
I'm pleased you do and have a great week end yourself mariaki! Thank you.Chris.

posted by Scramble on June 27, 2008 at 1:23 PM | link to this | reply

"Mind of matter" Loved this line..I have been having a hard time writing more new things..Thanks for this great Haiku!

posted by Wigopa_ on June 27, 2008 at 10:06 AM | link to this | reply

Scramble
by my pen-i guide the flow  ~  I love that line!!!!

posted by Troosha on June 27, 2008 at 8:21 AM | link to this | reply

scramble
and how well they glided

posted by Lanetay on June 27, 2008 at 5:53 AM | link to this | reply

Very clever Chris!
I like very much; thank you; God bless and have a superb weekend my friend

posted by mariaki on June 27, 2008 at 2:45 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Bless you and thank you Dark Moon! Have a great week end.Chris.

posted by Scramble on June 27, 2008 at 2:11 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Glad you like it sam! Have a great week end! Chris.

posted by Scramble on June 27, 2008 at 2:11 AM | link to this | reply

...very well done! moon

posted by magic_moon on June 26, 2008 at 3:24 PM | link to this | reply

Right on! or should I say write on! this is a fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   sam

posted by sam444 on June 26, 2008 at 3:11 PM | link to this | reply