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You have a very wonderful gift the way you write frees the heart soul mind!
posted by
Mystereo
on February 17, 2009 at 5:28 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on June 29, 2008 at 9:00 PM
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Just Pure Poetry ~ Excellence as the old poets. I really enjoyed this. Write ON!!~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on June 25, 2008 at 8:01 PM
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Re: Sam444
I am glad that you enjoyed it. I am especially pleased that you came back for a second read. Sometimes much lies hidden beneath the surface.
posted by
SFJoseph
on June 25, 2008 at 7:14 PM
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I wanted you to know that I just had to read this again for my own pleasure. Thank you! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 25, 2008 at 1:25 PM
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I thought this to be an awesome write as well. sam
posted by
sam444
on June 25, 2008 at 12:37 PM
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WOW DAD! This was just awesome!
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 25, 2008 at 12:49 AM
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This is incredibly profound and so well-written! Absolutely stunning imagery! I'm hooked already!!!!
posted by
NiteTide
on June 24, 2008 at 10:06 PM
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Absolutely beautiful poem. Loved the personification of the river and the comparison between its flow and life. Great work!!!
posted by
Sinome
on June 24, 2008 at 8:46 PM
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Very well written.
This piece is flowing and brings a message about one's life. We all are rivers flowing and all of us have hard, smooth, falls, peace, etc. from the hills and valleys we live through. It says a great deal about how you see life. Very pleasant to read such a nice piece.
Michaud Blaine
posted by
michaudblaine
on June 24, 2008 at 8:40 PM
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Re: Your poetry
Thank you for the kind praise, and comparisons. I too love Shel Silverstein and and fond of Robert Frost's writings. I am also becoming a great fan of Robert Browning, as well as the many fine poets that I have discovered on Blogit.
posted by
SFJoseph
on June 24, 2008 at 8:38 PM
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Your poetry
reminds me of Robert Frost, who is my favorite poet...Well, next to Shel Silverstein. LOL!
Seriously, I love the way you write.
posted by
CharlieMine
on June 24, 2008 at 8:29 PM
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Profound !
posted by
afzal50
on June 24, 2008 at 8:27 PM
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