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You have a very wonderful gift the way you write frees the heart soul mind!

posted by Mystereo on February 17, 2009 at 5:28 PM | link to this | reply

posted by 9STAR on June 29, 2008 at 9:00 PM | link to this | reply

Just Pure Poetry ~ Excellence as the old poets.  I really enjoyed this.  Write ON!!~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on June 25, 2008 at 8:01 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Sam444

I am glad that you enjoyed it.  I am especially pleased that you came back for a second read. Sometimes much lies hidden beneath the surface.

posted by SFJoseph on June 25, 2008 at 7:14 PM | link to this | reply

I wanted you to know that I just had to read this again for my own pleasure. Thank you! sam

posted by sam444 on June 25, 2008 at 1:25 PM | link to this | reply

I thought this to be an awesome write as well. sam

posted by sam444 on June 25, 2008 at 12:37 PM | link to this | reply

WOW DAD! This was just awesome!

posted by Wigopa_ on June 25, 2008 at 12:49 AM | link to this | reply

This is incredibly profound and so well-written!  Absolutely stunning imagery!  I'm hooked already!!!! 

posted by NiteTide on June 24, 2008 at 10:06 PM | link to this | reply

Absolutely beautiful poem.  Loved the personification of the river and the comparison between its flow and life.  Great work!!!

posted by Sinome on June 24, 2008 at 8:46 PM | link to this | reply

Very well written.

This piece is flowing and brings a message about one's life.  We all are rivers flowing and all of us have hard, smooth, falls, peace, etc. from the hills and valleys we live through.  It says a great deal about how you see life.  Very pleasant to read such a nice piece.

Michaud Blaine

posted by michaudblaine on June 24, 2008 at 8:40 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Your poetry

Thank you for the kind praise, and comparisons. I too love Shel Silverstein and and fond of Robert Frost's writings.  I am also becoming a great fan of Robert Browning, as well as the many fine poets that I have discovered on Blogit.

posted by SFJoseph on June 24, 2008 at 8:38 PM | link to this | reply

Your poetry

reminds me of Robert Frost, who is my favorite poet...Well, next to Shel Silverstein.  LOL!

Seriously, I love the way you write.

posted by CharlieMine on June 24, 2008 at 8:29 PM | link to this | reply

Profound !

posted by afzal50 on June 24, 2008 at 8:27 PM | link to this | reply