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the bottle to the curb
you poetry is very tight. Thanks for sharing your visionary ways
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 17, 2008 at 6:01 PM
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It is amazing, but I find a lot of reality contained within your words. When the bottles are empty it is a good indicator to move on! This is very good! I love how it gets one thinking! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 25, 2008 at 12:30 PM
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This is an amazing poem because it shows two stages of grief, first anger, then sadness... I am sorry for your loss... if this is literal... the good knew is that the next step will be acceptance...and you will feel more at peace. You write beautifully, I love your style and the honesty of your verse.
posted by
Sinome
on June 24, 2008 at 9:29 PM
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interesting imagery ...
she's a bottle on the curb, meaning that you feel free, yet the poem moves on from simple bitterness to melancholy. You need the bottle to forget her. Yo write your emotions well in a lyrical poem out of country music and rock some Dean Martin songs notwithstanding!
posted by
BC-A
on June 24, 2008 at 5:44 PM
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