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Now this is a mind blowing lession of heartship in a restless state, awsome

posted by Mystereo on February 17, 2009 at 5:24 PM | link to this | reply

Bravo!!! This is so moving.  Very interesting...really well-written and kept me wanting to follow each line and wanting more at the end.  Bravo!!!~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on June 25, 2008 at 7:59 PM | link to this | reply

I loved the imagery that was so delightful in the cadence provided through the rhyming.  sam

posted by sam444 on June 24, 2008 at 9:43 AM | link to this | reply

This is a wonderful take on the search for true love.

I loved the journey ... thank you for sharing ...

posted by VictoriaP on June 24, 2008 at 5:13 AM | link to this | reply

I am enjoying these so much.  You are fortunate to have this collection of his works.

posted by TAPS. on June 23, 2008 at 9:58 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful poem... loved the concept of "searching for his heart desire"  There are many lines in there that made my heartbeat hasten. "Like hope betrayed by countless lies. "  Exquisite way to describe the sadness in him.  You are indeed a poet sir :-) 

posted by Sinome on June 23, 2008 at 8:27 PM | link to this | reply

so sweet, so sad. gave me chills. very good write!

posted by RomaKay on June 23, 2008 at 8:03 PM | link to this | reply