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Now this is a mind blowing lession of heartship in a restless state, awsome
posted by
Mystereo
on February 17, 2009 at 5:24 PM
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Bravo!!! This is so moving. Very interesting...really well-written and kept me wanting to follow each line and wanting more at the end. Bravo!!!~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on June 25, 2008 at 7:59 PM
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I loved the imagery that was so delightful in the cadence provided through the rhyming. sam
posted by
sam444
on June 24, 2008 at 9:43 AM
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This is a wonderful take on the search for true love.
I loved the journey ... thank you for sharing ...
posted by
VictoriaP
on June 24, 2008 at 5:13 AM
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I am enjoying these so much. You are fortunate to have this collection of his works.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 23, 2008 at 9:58 PM
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Beautiful poem... loved the concept of "searching for his heart desire" There are many lines in there that made my heartbeat hasten. "Like hope betrayed by countless lies. " Exquisite way to describe the sadness in him. You are indeed a poet sir :-)
posted by
Sinome
on June 23, 2008 at 8:27 PM
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so sweet, so sad. gave me chills. very good write!
posted by
RomaKay
on June 23, 2008 at 8:03 PM
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