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I enjoyed the set up of the imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 20, 2008 at 2:14 PM
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This reminded me of
a track by Alanis Morrisette?
posted by
malcolm
on June 20, 2008 at 10:14 AM
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Dark
Pheww…. Now there’s a tortured soul. Sedated and speared….. hold my hand in medicated icelands. Some extremely gripping lines to convey the essence of this broken person.
posted by
Troosha
on June 20, 2008 at 7:55 AM
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Remorse. penitence, recrimination, pathos, self-exploratory ruminations, and the futility of hope, are all so beautifully brought out in this remarkable poem. Exceedingly well done dark mistress
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on June 20, 2008 at 12:10 AM
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Passionate and powerful !
posted by
afzal50
on June 19, 2008 at 11:51 PM
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wow, you have great grip on poetry my dear...i love the flow of this sentiments...great job!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on June 19, 2008 at 10:36 PM
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Totally Awesome!
Great poem! I like it very much.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on June 19, 2008 at 9:09 PM
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Now, I'm here giving you your comment back: OH WOW. I actually feel your emotions acutely in this poem...WOW. I think my favorite line is :
Had to witness the sun set in my eyes . - That line is so bittersweetly beautiful...WOW.
posted by
NiteTide
on June 19, 2008 at 5:43 PM
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